Please comment my poster!

[OzBungy]

It's a pity the woman's face is obscured by the bar float. It makes her look like one of those "no standing" signs.

[GrodanBoll]

Thank you guys for your feedback!

Here comes version 2



* I scaled up the girl a little bit. (can't scale her to much since she might become unsharp)
* Added my logo at the bottom
* Removed some of the noise
* Added "med gusty.se" at the top right corner.

for those that wonder what the text means in english, here is a translation:

Learn to kitesurf! (with gusty.se!)

Did you know that kitesurfing is the fastest growing extreme sport in the world?
Take a course and you'll understand why!

For more info visit gusty.se
or send email to gustav@gusty.se

Regarding the girl that has the floater across her face... that´s of course a pity, but you can't believe how hard is to find a good photo for making a poster! Searching for a good photo was the part that took the longest time when I did this poster. Searching on google is more or less useless since all 99% of the photos are in low resolution.
99% of the good photos that I got my hands over show guys and I prefer to have a girl to target both males and females.
And from the remaining photos with girls, how many do you think show a "pretty" girl performing a nice trick without turning her face away, showing her ass or the bottom of her board...

PS. I got this photo from Terrie, so all credits to him!

[Nico]

The foto is OK for someone who kites already (intermediate).
Someone who has never done it will be more attracted to a more classic ride instead of a raily.
A smiling rider waving or something like that.
Just My opinion.
Nico

[GrodanBoll]

The foto is OK for someone who kites already (intermediate).
Someone who has never done it will be more attracted to a more classic ride instead of a raily.
A smiling rider waving or something like that.
Just My opinion.
Nico

I hear ya, but again, finding a high resolution 300 dpi photo of a smiling rider carving on a perfect wave is impossible!

Not even shutterstock and those sites where you can buy photos have anything useful... The best I can find on shutterstock is this photo:


If you know where I can find a better photo, please let me know =)

[JamesVegas]

Someone who has never done it will be more attracted to a more classic ride instead of a raily.

Looks more like a gaily to me.